In appreciation of Art class, we were assigned an essay on a live performance. As art is not only paintings and sculpture, but also includes live music, dancing, and theater. Having been a dancer all of my life I always enjoy live art of any kind and I was reminded by attending this performance that I should make it more of a priority in my life. An obvious point that needs improvement in my writing is word choice and fluidity. It is easy to see I do not put enough time in to my final editing when I read the article and find myself going over and over the same sentence wondering exactly what I was trying to say and thinking it should not be that complicated to interpret. Having worked mostly with children for twenty years, I am aware my vocabulary did not grow after high school.